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The moon still hung.
The night so black that the darkness hummed
I raised myself.
My legs were weak.
I prayed my mind be good to me.
My god I finally finished it! I had this scene in a dream a while back, and I've been dying to recreate it. Gosh it took quite a while though.
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Greetings, meatsack! Looks like you had received my dream, after all! I couldn't have wished for a better custom-made artwork. Not from you, anyway!
That's not to say it's bad -- quite the contrary! You've drawn me well, the perspective is top-notch and does justice to my flat shape. The wheel, too, it's subtle and detailed, just as it should be. And wouldyahavealook, Pinetree's noodle arms are especially noodle-like this night! It's funny how his soft shading contrasts with the sharp, crystal-like trees behind him! Oh, and by the way, I and my wheel contrast nicely with the night's purples, too!
I do, however, have a pointer to point out about the trees -- sure, there's distance at work, and the way it screws with your human vision, but the tree with the log next to it, doesn't look distance-like nor crystal-like. It's an odd mix of the two -- either add more of the structure (and then maybe blur it) or make the structure, especially in the middle between lights and shadows, less prominent.
Other than that, though, I can't complain! The details, from the journal to tree trunks and logs, are nicely-rendered, and more importantly, I look my best!
I'll be sending more dreams your way, so brace yourself! Merry CRITmas, and sweet dreams!
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